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Title: Writing Contest - The Screenplays
Post by: joecartoon131 on June 29, 2008, 08:54:18 AM
I guess I'll start things off...

http://moosepiecomedy.com/tmp/TheHealingAbbr.pdf (http://moosepiecomedy.com/tmp/TheHealingAbbr.pdf)

My short script, titled The Healing (which is actually being filmed right now) is about a man and woman's final conversations. It has been trimmed to exactly 10 pages long (11 including the title page).

The requested line of "sometimes we leave things to be found" appears as "sometimes we leave lost things to be found".

Genre: Drama.
Title: Re: Writing Contest - The Screenplays
Post by: Rohan on June 29, 2008, 08:52:49 PM
I guess I'll start things off...

http://moosepiecomedy.com/tmp/TheHealingAbbr.pdf (http://moosepiecomedy.com/tmp/TheHealingAbbr.pdf)

My short script, titled The Healing (which is actually being filmed right now) is about a man and woman's final conversations. It has been trimmed to exactly 10 pages long (11 including the title page).

The requested line of "sometimes we leave things to be found" appears as "sometimes we leave lost things to be found".

Genre: Drama.

Its good. Good writing. Wish it would be full length script.

Rohan
Title: Re: Writing Contest - The Screenplays
Post by: Namaste on June 29, 2008, 09:13:45 PM
Pretty good. gave me goosebumps. It's an old familiar story, but well told.
Title: Re: Writing Contest - The Screenplays
Post by: Erik on June 30, 2008, 01:29:49 PM
Alright, here's mine.
http://eduweb.hhs.nl/~07014759/bumpyride.pdf

It's a short animated movie, I wrote it some time ago and there are some people producing it right now. The story is changed to make it a little longer (the orignal script was 3 pages) and to include the famous line.

Unfortionately, I broke the first rule of the contest. My script is only 4 pages. I hope we can agree on something that doesn't disqualify me...?