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The Lounge => Aspiring Filmmakers => Topic started by: the_sorcerer on January 09, 2009, 03:46:58 PM

Title: New Script!!! Shooting this weekend! Critiques needed!!!
Post by: the_sorcerer on January 09, 2009, 03:46:58 PM
Hey guys, so we're shooting a short this weekend, I'd appreciate if anyone would want to critique it. Just send me your email and I'll shoot you over a PDF!
Title: Re: New Script!!! Shooting this weekend! Critiques needed!!!
Post by: Erik on January 10, 2009, 05:35:52 PM
Alrighty, I read it.

I don't have really much to add, it really isn't bad. Though, on the other side, I don't think the story has anything special either. It's a little bit avarege if you ask me.