My first Short Film (kind of) online


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My first Short Film (kind of) online
« on: April 28, 2008, 12:18:45 AM »
Hello everyone. I am currenty in college taking an audio/video broadcast production program here at Hocking College. This is my first "real" video that I have made that is on the web. This is basicly a video about why I like this college so much. This video was made for a contest that the entire school could participate in! The judging is on most views so I hope most everyone here will watch it. I am pretty much interested in TV broadcast, film and a litte radio.

I used a Kodak easy share z88 digital camera for the filming. Editing was done with Sony Vegas (sp?) Hope you like, any feedback would be nice.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Dacwq2QRe-k
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« Reply #1 on: April 28, 2008, 04:50:39 AM »
Alright, I've watched it.

First of all, I won't call it a film, but more a short documentary and to be honest, I don't find it really intresting.
Though the camera work, sound and use of music is well done!

I asume this is one of your first director films/documentaries? It's a good start, I hope you'll make it one day!
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« Reply #2 on: April 28, 2008, 04:52:52 PM »
Thanks, I guess this would be my first director film documentary. :)

I worked on a few small stop motions projects before this, but this is probaby the most I have done so far. It was made in about two days. I don't think it's that entertaining either but it had to be finished quickly. It's a start.
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« Reply #3 on: April 28, 2008, 11:32:21 PM »
It could have definitely been shorter.  I thought the guy on the bench was wierd, in a good way.  Did you tell him to act like that?  Kind of funny.  When you showed the library through the shelves, you should have had him peeking over the books like he was being sneaky.
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« Reply #4 on: April 29, 2008, 08:53:24 AM »
ONe question, was it supposed to be a film, or a documentary.  I thought it was pretty well done, a little boring, but for a first time, not bad.
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« Reply #5 on: April 29, 2008, 09:18:52 AM »
That's a good idea Lifeordeath1. :) The guy on the bench had to talk about all the things he liked about the college. I think one of my biggest problems was not writing a script for him. ;D ;D

The contest rule said it had to be a youtube video about "Why we love Hocking College". So I guess it turned out to be more of a documentary than a film with a story. I could of also made it more like a commercial.
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« Reply #6 on: April 30, 2008, 09:09:52 AM »
That's a good point Villager, still, not bad for a first go. ;D
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Re: My first Short Film (kind of) online
« Reply #7 on: April 30, 2008, 07:12:43 PM »
hey on the same topic.

i have a YouTube site as well.
i love making movies.

all of them have won 1st place awards at various film festivals.

youtube.com/aneesh815

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« Reply #8 on: May 01, 2008, 09:01:07 AM »
I have a youtube account, I just haven't put anything up on it.
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