Script needs critique.....


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Script needs critique.....
« on: May 27, 2008, 09:19:52 AM »
Hey guys, I just finished a rough draft script for a zombie movie that I'm doing.  It's a very short film, but if anyone would like to review the script and maybe give me some pointers, it'd be much appreciated!
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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2008, 11:27:54 AM »
Very short means...? How many pages?
Anyway, I'll take a look at it. PM me!
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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2008, 05:44:35 PM »
So where is your script?  Is there a link?
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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #3 on: June 04, 2008, 02:50:19 PM »
I?d like to read that too ;)

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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #4 on: June 04, 2008, 07:08:27 PM »
Thanks guys!  here's the link:
http://www.geocities.com/burningsorcerer/zombiemovie.txt

Just FYI, it's a comedy, just so it doesn't seem weird haha.  Any comments are much appreciated!
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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #5 on: June 07, 2008, 04:42:42 PM »
Thanks guys!  here's the link:
http://www.geocities.com/burningsorcerer/zombiemovie.txt

Just FYI, it's a comedy, just so it doesn't seem weird haha.  Any comments are much appreciated!


Ahahahhahah.... good one, dude. I like it. SHAWN OF THE DEAD2... ahhah good writing. I like it.


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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #6 on: June 17, 2008, 11:16:55 AM »
Thanks for reading it man! This is my first script that i've worked with, so i'm just kinda nervous as to how it will play on screen.
Damn! If it's gonna be that kinda party, Ima have to put ma dick in tha mashed potatas!