Writing Contest - The Screenplays


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Writing Contest - The Screenplays
« on: June 29, 2008, 08:54:18 AM »
I guess I'll start things off...

http://moosepiecomedy.com/tmp/TheHealingAbbr.pdf

My short script, titled The Healing (which is actually being filmed right now) is about a man and woman's final conversations. It has been trimmed to exactly 10 pages long (11 including the title page).

The requested line of "sometimes we leave things to be found" appears as "sometimes we leave lost things to be found".

Genre: Drama.
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Re: Writing Contest - The Screenplays
« Reply #1 on: June 29, 2008, 08:52:49 PM »
I guess I'll start things off...

http://moosepiecomedy.com/tmp/TheHealingAbbr.pdf

My short script, titled The Healing (which is actually being filmed right now) is about a man and woman's final conversations. It has been trimmed to exactly 10 pages long (11 including the title page).

The requested line of "sometimes we leave things to be found" appears as "sometimes we leave lost things to be found".

Genre: Drama.

Its good. Good writing. Wish it would be full length script.

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Re: Writing Contest - The Screenplays
« Reply #2 on: June 29, 2008, 09:13:45 PM »
Pretty good. gave me goosebumps. It's an old familiar story, but well told.
See the villain's larger eyes insinuating a just-off-normal perspective on how they see the world? I see signs Lucius Hunt; just not as you see dead people. I am so very happy we saw..each other, and no I will not tell you what color love is. Stop asking.

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Re: Writing Contest - The Screenplays
« Reply #3 on: June 30, 2008, 01:29:49 PM »
Alright, here's mine.
http://eduweb.hhs.nl/~07014759/bumpyride.pdf

It's a short animated movie, I wrote it some time ago and there are some people producing it right now. The story is changed to make it a little longer (the orignal script was 3 pages) and to include the famous line.

Unfortionately, I broke the first rule of the contest. My script is only 4 pages. I hope we can agree on something that doesn't disqualify me...?
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