New Script....any review/critique would be appreciated!!!!


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New Script....any review/critique would be appreciated!!!!
« on: August 19, 2008, 03:35:49 PM »
Hey guys, so they gave us about 4 hours to write a short for class, I just posted it up online if anyone wants to give us some pointers or anything!  We start shooting tomorrow, so we're just putting the fine touches on the script right now.  Thanks guys! you can find the script at http://www.geocities.com/burningsorcerer/anotherday.txt
Damn! If it's gonna be that kinda party, Ima have to put ma dick in tha mashed potatas!

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Re: New Script....any review/critique would be appreciated!!!!
« Reply #1 on: August 19, 2008, 05:22:18 PM »
Well written. Nice plot.

Rohan