New Script Needs Critique!!!!!!


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the_sorcerer

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New Script Needs Critique!!!!!!
« on: November 09, 2008, 02:24:02 PM »
Hey guys, so I just finished another rough draft of a short that we're going to start filming around December/January, and I would really appreciate it if anyone would want to read it and critique it. If you'd be interested let me know and I'll send you a link to it!!
Damn! If it's gonna be that kinda party, Ima have to put ma dick in tha mashed potatas!

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Re: New Script Needs Critique!!!!!!
« Reply #1 on: November 09, 2008, 02:56:20 PM »
Lemmee read it!
Do you think you could beat up Bruce Lee?  I mean, if you knew karate?  What if he wasn't allowed to kick, and you were really mad at him?