Script needs critique.....


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the_sorcerer

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Script needs critique.....
« on: May 27, 2008, 09:19:52 AM »
Hey guys, I just finished a rough draft script for a zombie movie that I'm doing.  It's a very short film, but if anyone would like to review the script and maybe give me some pointers, it'd be much appreciated!

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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #1 on: May 27, 2008, 11:27:54 AM »
Very short means...? How many pages?
Anyway, I'll take a look at it. PM me!
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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #2 on: May 27, 2008, 05:44:35 PM »
So where is your script?  Is there a link?
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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #3 on: June 04, 2008, 02:50:19 PM »
I?d like to read that too ;)

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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #4 on: June 04, 2008, 07:08:27 PM »
Thanks guys!  here's the link:
http://www.geocities.com/burningsorcerer/zombiemovie.txt

Just FYI, it's a comedy, just so it doesn't seem weird haha.  Any comments are much appreciated!

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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #5 on: June 07, 2008, 04:42:42 PM »
Thanks guys!  here's the link:
http://www.geocities.com/burningsorcerer/zombiemovie.txt

Just FYI, it's a comedy, just so it doesn't seem weird haha.  Any comments are much appreciated!


Ahahahhahah.... good one, dude. I like it. SHAWN OF THE DEAD2... ahhah good writing. I like it.


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Re: Script needs critique.....
« Reply #6 on: June 17, 2008, 11:16:55 AM »
Thanks for reading it man! This is my first script that i've worked with, so i'm just kinda nervous as to how it will play on screen.